Saturday, August 29, 2009

Spinning Down from Heaven


I thought I would point out a few things that I am trying to accomplish with this poem. First of all, notice the alliteration of the S sound - representing the silence of the falling snow. The indented lines are meant to resemble falling snow and I did my best to describe what a snowflake looks like:

 


 

The snow is falling

Like frozen spider webs

 Spinning down from Heaven



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